SHORT STORY PABLO AND THE IMPOSSIBLE EXPERIMENT
PABLO AND THE IMPOSSIBLE EXPERIMENT
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Pablo had spent weeks preparing for that moment. In the small school theatre, while everyone else talked about the science festival, he worked quietly behind the curtain. He adjusted cables, tested sensors, and checked his calculations again and again. No one imagined that this science demonstration would, in fact, be an experiment designed to look like a miracle.

The Show in the Auditorium
On the night of the event, the auditorium was full. Teachers, students, and parents filled every seat with a mix of curiosity and scepticism. Pablo stepped onto the stage with practiced calm. He smiled, raised one hand, and explained that he was about to show how science could create an illusion so perfect that even the most doubtful people would question their own eyes.
The lights went out. For a few seconds, only the murmur of the audience could be heard. Then, at the centre of the stage, a crystal sphere began to glow with a bluish light. Soon after, a thin mist spread across the floor. A luminous figure seemed to form in the air, as if an invisible hand were drawing it with fire. A collective gasp moved through the room. Some people covered their mouths. Others stood up from their seats.
The figure slowly raised an arm. A flash crossed the stage, and suddenly a shower of sparks fell from above. Nothing burned. It seemed to obey a force beyond physics. The audience froze. “It’s impossible,” someone whispered. Hidden behind a console, Pablo watched the effect with restrained satisfaction. Everything was working: projections, cold vapor, electromagnetic fields, and a mirror system that turned his setup into something almost supernatural.
The glow that shouldn’t exist
When the lights came back on, the stage was empty. Only the sphere remained, now dark, resting on a pedestal. Pablo walked to the centre and, in a calm voice, revealed the trick. He explained every mechanism, every reaction, and every technical detail. But the auditorium stayed silent, as if part of them still refused to accept that it had all been science.
Then something unexpected happened. From the back row, a little girl raised her hand and pointed at the ceiling. Everyone looked up. There, suspended above the stage, a small glow was still floating. It was faint, but real. It looked like a star refusing to go out. Pablo’s eyes widened. That was not part of the plan.
For the first time that night, he felt a chill too.
He began to wonder what had happened. The final effect had not been fully planned. It came from a combination of stage illusion and a tiny system failure. That small detail was enough to make everything seem impossible.
The suspended glow was most likely caused by one of two things:
- A leftover projection or LED light: a microprojector, fiber optic strand, or light point may have stayed on a few seconds longer than expected, creating the impression of a floating star.
- A particle or filament in the air: smoke, cold vapor, or an almost invisible thread may have caught the stage light and remained visible in the air.
Pablo had controlled almost everything, but that last detail escaped his design. It made both the audience and Pablo himself doubt what they had seen. No one knew whether they had witnessed a trick, a technical error, or something truly supernatural.
Pablo’s Obsession
It took him several days to accept what he had discovered that night in the theater. But It was not only science that had impressed the audience. It was also the way people had wanted to believe. The light, the smoke, the silence, and the expectation had all worked together to turn a trick into a revelation. And that idea, more than the experiment itself, was what began to haunt him.
Then he thought of the main square, empty in the early hours of the morning, with its yellow streetlights and the echo of footsteps on stone. He imagined an even more striking setup. An impossible appearance. A voice rising from the mist and a figure wrapped in light. If he could make a few people see it, he thought, the rest would follow. Suggestion would do the work. Faith would do the rest.
For days, he prepared the device with almost obsessive precision. He placed hidden speakers, programmed lights, a vapor system, and a sequence of projections that, in the dark, could seem like a supernatural presence. His plan was simple and dangerous: appear as a messenger, speak with solemnity, plant mystery, and let others build a story around him that was bigger than the truth.
The Plaza and the Revelation
But when dawn came and he activated the setup, things did not go as expected. The square was more alive than he had imagined. A street cleaner, a night delivery worker, and two young people walking home stopped when they saw the first light. Pablo, hidden behind an archway, heard their voices. At first, they sounded curious. Then amazed. The spectacle worked too well. Within minutes, people began to gather. Some filmed with their phones. Others knelt down. One even whispered that it was a sign.
Pablo then stepped into the scene, wrapped in darkness, and spoke the words he had rehearsed. He talked about destiny, revelation, and obedience. But as he spoke, he saw something he had not expected: not admiration, but fear. Not devotion, but need. Those people did not want a prophet. They wanted an answer to their loneliness, their problems, and their uncertainty. And he was about to take advantage of that.
His voice broke. The silence that followed was deeper than any special effect. A woman stepped forward and asked him, with heartbreaking sadness, whether he could truly help them or whether he was just another man disguised as certainty. Pablo looked at the square, the lights, and the expectant faces. Then he understood that the power he thought he controlled was actually a trap. Suggestion could move crowds, yes, but it could also destroy them.
He shut the system down.
The luminous figure disappeared. The mist dissolved, and the square became just a square again, cold and silent. Some people left angry. Others left disappointed. But Pablo stayed there, motionless, with shame burning in his chest. That night, he understood that the real experiment had not been to deceive people, but to resist doing so. And for the first time since it all began; he chose the truth.
Pablo And The Impossible Experiment – Short stories series – Copyright ©Montserrat Valls and Juan Genovés
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